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simple things. by *mariecamin:iconmariecamin:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2006-2009 *mariecamin
:iconmariecamin:

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me.


note: first ever attempt at visual poetry. I'm pleased.
i wrote the poetry. i stuck the notes on my mirror, made my mother hold up a white sheet behind me, made sure the notes covered my reflection of private body parts haha, then took the photo of the mirror with my reflection in the background. (Just thought i'd let you know how it was done, some people thought i edited the notes in.)

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:iconnikixfm:
~nikixfm Apr 10, 2006, 12:30:52 AM
very nice.
effective!
i ahven't seen something like this before, so welldone.
:iconangie57:
~angie57 Apr 10, 2006, 12:32:02 AM
saw this while i was browsing... thought it looked really cool. you should deffinitely do more visual poetry.
:icontoriathan:
~Toriathan Apr 10, 2006, 12:32:19 AM
You should be pleased I think. It's beautifully artisic and a great use of color contrast. The shadow of the figure int he back is great for the composition as it adds depth to the post its and their words.

--
"Sure I can draw. I'm very artistic, you know. My stick people have FEELING."

Read some poetry today (you know you want to)! -> [link]
:iconsad-pixie:
~Sad-PiXiE Apr 10, 2006, 12:34:39 AM
this is very beautiful, and powerful.
your amazing Marie.

--
Tegan.Louise.07

[link]
:iconlesmick:
~lesmick Apr 10, 2006, 12:45:28 AM
I love it, I love it, I love it...

I love everything...

have a fav!!!

--
The skyline was beautiful on fire...
:iconj-e-n-i:
~j-e-n-i Apr 10, 2006, 6:24:16 AM
I really love it! this is the first time ive browsed visual poetry and yours stood out to me!

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...Miss Brightside...
:iconpinkymccoversong:
`PinkyMcCoversong Apr 10, 2006, 9:13:44 PM
there are so many cool elements to this piece. i'd like to see more work from you! in the future it would be great to see work that veered away from cliches. i know the concept here is "simple" but you could take the concept of simplicity and express it in a way that conveys simplicity but isn't simple in and of itself...especially in the medium of visual poetry :D. nice work, though!

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< GunShyMartyr > PinkyMcCoversong: o hi asl plz
< PinkyMcCoversong > GunShyMartyr: ask again in a cockney accent
< GunShyMartyr > ELLO daaaahling, what's yah name then. giveus a kiss would ya love? yer eighteen roite?
:icontunnel-of-lovers:
~Tunnel-Of-Lovers Apr 12, 2006, 6:31:32 PM
I LOVE IT! Very cool, I love how you have the notes as an empahisis, but still the body in the background to add mystery. LOVE IT.

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<3,

BROOKE


"They say time changes things, but you really have to change things yourself."
-Andy Warhol
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~drownsoda4 Apr 12, 2006, 9:44:48 PM
this is so cute.

i absolutely love it
:iconsaint-nightmare:
~Saint-Nightmare Apr 12, 2006, 10:38:24 PM
I can honstly say that this is the first piece of visual ever that I have liked.

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WRITE MOTHERFUCKER
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